Jay Posted 25 October 2009 Posted 25 October 2009 as many of you know I'm a bit of a music junkie, I buy more music than is actually good for me in a wide variety of styles. I have decided about 10years after it was popular to start a music blog to review any new music I get my hands on. I have done 3 reviews so far but more will be added all the time, I hope some of you will take 5mins and let me know what you think so far. The Blog can be found at.... http://myeclecticear.blogspot.com/ any feedback will be appreciated unless it's regarding a spelling mistake or something!!
Lillehamring Posted 25 October 2009 Posted 25 October 2009 interesting, i'd be keen to listen to some of that music based on your descriptions; so, generally, a good start... if i'd suggest anything, i'd like it to be a bit more personal, it reads a bit like a press release rather than as a passionate personal experience by the music junkie we know you to be... ....oh, and i know you said don't mention spelling and so on, but i do have to say that your punctuation is very sparse and i had to read quite a bit of it a couple of times, which is not what you want from a blog, and also i would suggest you put song title in italics so they stand out from the text, again not a major thing but just a little confusing. hope that helps, good job and interesting subjects, keep it up!
Jay Posted 25 October 2009 Author Posted 25 October 2009 interesting, i'd be keen to listen to some of that music based on your descriptions; so, generally, a good start...if i'd suggest anything, i'd like it to be a bit more personal, it reads a bit like a press release rather than as a passionate personal experience by the music junkie we know you to be... ....oh, and i know you said don't mention spelling and so on, but i do have to say that your punctuation is very sparse and i had to read quite a bit of it a couple of times, which is not what you want from a blog, and also i would suggest you put song title in italics so they stand out from the text, again not a major thing but just a little confusing. hope that helps, good job and interesting subjects, keep it up! all good points and much appreciated!! as for the Punctuation was a bit of a rush job, only decided today to start it so will go back and have a look over some of the blogs. Thanks again
General Smuts Posted 25 October 2009 Posted 25 October 2009 The competition! Will definately give this a read Jay.
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