Father Ted Posted 15 June 2008 Posted 15 June 2008 My first article, on vital football, hope you like it, although vitalfootball made an error on the home page by saying 'FatherTed on the draw v Stockport in the Johnstone Paint Trophy.... ' which is wrong but anyway here it is: Johnstone's Paint Trophy
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Father Ted Posted 15 June 2008 Author Posted 15 June 2008 And now my second article, please read people, I want to hear your views Latest from the Walkers Stadium
Simi Posted 15 June 2008 Posted 15 June 2008 And now my second article, please read people, I want to hear your views Latest from the Walkers Stadium You're a bit Christian Ziege aren't you?
Father Ted Posted 15 June 2008 Author Posted 15 June 2008 Your a bit Christian Ziege aren't you? In what way, the way that he was crap or that he was crap at one thing and amazing at another?
lildave3 Posted 15 June 2008 Posted 15 June 2008 You're a bit Christian Ziege aren't you? You've been reading up on your rhyming slang today. That's three times i've seen.
Ibbyfox Posted 15 June 2008 Posted 15 June 2008 In what way, the way that he was crap or that he was crap at one thing and amazing at another? Christian Ziege .............. Eager Nice articles by the way. keep it up mate.
AmericanScott Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 Past winners of the Johnstone Paint Trophy include:2004: Blackpool 2005: Wrexham 2006: Swansea 2007: Bristol Rovers 2008: Mk Dons Doncaster won it in 2007
Halfsy Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 Sorry to say but i didn't think the articles were well written at all. The punctuation is very poor and some paragraphs don't make any sense. Also as stated above Doncaster Rovers won the JPT in the 2006/07 season, not Bristol Rovers. Please feel free to take a browse at my latest articles. http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1327729,00.html http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1326059,00.html http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1325561,00.html
Joe. Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 Sorry to say but i didn't think the articles were well written at all.The punctuation is very poor and some paragraphs don't make any sense. Also as stated above Doncaster Rovers won the JPT in the 2006/07 season, not Bristol Rovers. Please feel free to take a browse at my latest articles. http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1327729,00.html http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1326059,00.html http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1325561,00.html Thanks Halfsy. We really want you to post more of your Argyle stories in the future, it would make many of us extremely happy.
Daggers Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 Thanks Halfsy. We really want you to post more of your Argyle stories in the future, it would make many of us extremely happy. I think you speak for all of us there - I was very impressed by them.
Halfsy Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 That's okay. Just thought i'd let you all know how to be a proper journalist . .
Father Ted Posted 16 June 2008 Author Posted 16 June 2008 Sorry to say but i didn't think the articles were well written at all.The punctuation is very poor and some paragraphs don't make any sense. Also as stated above Doncaster Rovers won the JPT in the 2006/07 season, not Bristol Rovers. Please feel free to take a browse at my latest articles. http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1327729,00.html http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1326059,00.html http://www.pafc.premiumtv.co.uk/page/NewsD...1325561,00.html God, calm down, I have only just started. Anyway, the Doncaster one was just purely a mistake, I'm sure you've made many. (Especially by supporting Plymouth )
Daggers Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 Just thought i'd let you all know how to be a proper journalist . . Proper journalists write for the Pasty website do they? Did you ever dream you could reach such a lofty and influential position?
Halfsy Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 I'm actually a City fan and i think you'll find an 18 year old writing for a Championship club is a good start. . . They're certainly in a much better state than us. . . Keep writing and keep me informed of your articles!
filbertway Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 God, calm down, I have only just started. Anyway, the Doncaster one was just purely a mistake, I'm sure you've made many. (Especially by supporting Plymouth ) I agree with the Plymouth fan that there's a few rough edges like puncuation and it didn't seem to read like a typical article. But obviously it's not going to be 100% bang on is it first time, decent effort for a first time though. Just trying to give an honest opinion like
Halfsy Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 I'm a city fan! just trying to help you out mate, of course my first articles weren't perfect either! Keep practising and it'll get there!
Zingari Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 I'm a city fan!just trying to help you out mate, of course my first articles weren't perfect either! Keep practising and it'll get there! does this mean your later ones are ?
Joe. Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 I'm a city fan!just trying to help you out mate, of course my first articles weren't perfect either! Keep practising and it'll get there! It did seem as though you were a Plymouth fan, I apologise. How have you come about writing for them then ahead of actual Argyle supporters?
Father Ted Posted 16 June 2008 Author Posted 16 June 2008 I agree with the Plymouth fan that there's a few rough edges like puncuation and it didn't seem to read like a typical article. But obviously it's not going to be 100% bang on is it first time, decent effort for a first time though. Just trying to give an honest opinion like Thanks for the feedback Although, you know on the computer when your writing, do you ever get it when you go to fix a mistake and as your writing it, it wipes out the words after it?? How can you fix it? Because that's what happens when I write the articles and I blame that...
AmericanScott Posted 16 June 2008 Posted 16 June 2008 I wanted to become a journalist but i'm not the best at writting. So, i left college. How did you become a writter for the PAFC website at only 18? Do they pay you? Sorry for the questions
Father Ted Posted 16 June 2008 Author Posted 16 June 2008 I have now also written another article on our fixtures Click here to read
Father Ted Posted 18 June 2008 Author Posted 18 June 2008 Mcauley transfer confirmed Another article from me...
lookwhaticando Posted 18 June 2008 Posted 18 June 2008 No offence... but we get the picture. We're pleased for you. We're pleased that you're publishing lots of articles on Vital Football... but we get the idea now. Those that are genuinely interested in Vital Football will check the site anyway, and don't need a reminder every five minutes that you're writing something new. As I said, I mean you no offence, but you've been talking to yourself for the last couple of days in this thread.
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