I need some feedback on my blog

[Rincewind]

Updated my blog.

 

http://lcfc1884.wordpress.com/

[luckyalex13]

An update of epic proportions (as I have been lazy)

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/02/i-am-back.html

[Rincewind]

Just added a video to my Blog

[luckyalex13]

Weight loss update!!!!

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/02/keep-em-coming.html

[lavrentis]

[Guest MattP]

Just updated my blog about ATOS.

 

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2570144/Aspergers-sufferer-phobia-food-dead-judged-fit-work-benefits-cut.html

[Strokes]

Just updated my blog about ATOS.

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2570144/Aspergers-sufferer-phobia-food-dead-judged-fit-work-benefits-cut.html

Dont worry its in the daily fail, nobody will believe this crap.

[Guest MattP]

Exactly.

 

Clearly bullshit.

[The People's Hero]

Weight loss update!!!!

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/02/keep-em-coming.html

 

Did you take a picture of the dyson attachment especially for the blog, or just find it on your camera and find it amusing.

 

Might go and take a look at our upstairs dyson now, bit old but it may also have a funny face. HUMBLEBRAG.

[luckyalex13]

Did you take a picture of the dyson attachment especially for the blog, or just find it on your camera and find it amusing.

 

Might go and take a look at our upstairs dyson now, bit old but it may also have a funny face. HUMBLEBRAG.

 

i took the picture specifically for the blog....sad right!!! :-) i find faces so many places..... http://luckyal13.blogspot.com/2014/01/things-with-faces.html

[luckyalex13]

My latest Update, please read

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/03/what-to-write-first.html

[Rincewind]

I've put the link to my blog in my sig again.

[Rincewind]

Not sure where to post this. My sister sent me a poem inspired by comments made in this article and some of the 'NIMBY' comments made on local TV in particular one bloke who said 'Its their own fault'

 

http://www.newsandstar.co.uk/news/homeless-hostel-in-west-cumbria-could-also-house-just-released-prisoners-1.1077534

 

Peace

 

 

I know I’ll rest in peace tonight,

though it’s cold here in my bed.                                       

There’s ice inside my window pane

Making clouds out of my breath,

I don’t mind, I’ll curl up tight

Just me and Little Ted.                                 

 

I hope I’ll rest in peace tonight.

It really isn’t “funâ€.

Waking me with clammy hands

Brylcreem plastered head.

I feel unclean, don’t understand,

Please go to mum instead.

 

Just let me rest in peace tonight,

Get out my room you creep!

I laugh at your pathetic tries

To glimpse me half undressed.

I’m going soon, moving out

I’m too old to be led.

 

Just let me rest in peace tonight,

Don’t wake me from my bed.

Clenched fists and gritted teeth

Please tell me what I said

My shining armour mounted knight?

My dreaming vacant head!

 

I hope I’ll rest in peace tonight

Though I don’t know where I’ll sleep

Another drink then I won’t think

I’ll choose some guy instead

If I can stay I’ll sleep with him

Fair price for a bed.

 

I know she’ll rest in peace tonight,

As we lift her from the floor

The bloodied kerbstone where she fell

Can’t tell us any more

Junkie? Crackhead? Tom? Old Soak?

It’s her own fault that she’s dead.

 

The poem included pictures for each stanza but they have not come out on here.

Managed to insert the pictures. I think they tell a story too. A young woman that grew up in a house where she was abused as a child then moved onto violent relationship before moving out without nowhere to go. Would that be a life choice? Well I don;t think so.

But you are free to make your own minds up. I won't judge you as I won't judge others that I do not know.

 

 

Apologies if you do not like the post or the link. It is not meant for your eyes.

I am not being allowed to post the images. They are from a document.

[luckyalex13]

Latest Update

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/04/my-week.html

 

My Father-in-law has been tragically diagnosed with Terminal Pancreatic Cancer. 

My brother-in-law Chris Toadfish Thomas and I are trying to raise money for Pancreatic Cancer Research by doing a sponsored skydive. If you can spare any amount it would be appreciated x

http://www.doitforcharity.com/alexwebster

[Rincewind]

My latest blog entry. Also in my signature.

 

 

http://lcfc1884.wordpress.com/2014/04/17/invisible/?preview=true&preview_id=438&preview_nonce=f6a052facd&post_format=standard.

 

Just added a similar poem but done in the acrostic form,

[Rincewind]

I have a new follower on my blog.

Apparently a freelance model among other things.

 

A student at Warick university an astronomer

Bit too high brow for me. Into horse riding polo running mythology any psychology..

[luckyalex13]

This is a very serious and heartfelt blog (which makes a change)

 

Please let me know what you think

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/04/1-year-of-blogging.html

[luckyalex13]

We did the Skydive!!!!!!! so I blogged about it!!!

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/05/skydive.html

[luckyalex13]

Top 10 TV Series!!!!!  

 

http://luckyal13.blo...eries-ever.html

[luckyalex13]

Hair Yesterday Gone Today

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/05/hair-yesterday-gone-today.html

[luckyalex13]

28 views to get to 15,000 WOW!!!!! http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/ 

[luckyalex13]

Funny Logo's

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/05/some-of-worst-company-logos-ever.html

[luckyalex13]

This is scary

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.com/2014/06/sleep-paralysis.html

[luckyalex13]

My World Cup Teams & Players to Watch

 

http://luckyal13.blogspot.com/2014/06/the-world-cup-my-guide-to-teams-and.html

[luckyalex13]

A catch up blog!!

http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/2014/07/jokers-right.html