luckyalex13 Posted 25 July 2013 Posted 25 July 2013 Hi, I have started writing a blog and need some feed back, it is meant to be amussing but probably isnt unless you know me but I would like some feedback on how it can be improved (maybe contant, maybe other things). cheers. http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/
MooseBreath Posted 25 July 2013 Posted 25 July 2013 Needs a purpose. Nobody wants to read about you sitting in a chair, bro. Oh, and more 24-year-old best mate pictures
luckyalex13 Posted 25 July 2013 Author Posted 25 July 2013 Needs a purpose. Nobody wants to read about you sitting in a chair, bro. Oh, and more 24-year-old best mate pictures until they realise the effect of the chair
DANGEROUS TIGER Posted 25 July 2013 Posted 25 July 2013 Hi, I have started writing a blog and need some feed back, it is meant to be amussing but probably isnt unless you know me but I would like some feedback on how it can be improved (maybe contant, maybe other things). cheers. http://luckyal13.blogspot.co.uk/ Well, I think it is just fine.
The God Emperor Posted 25 July 2013 Posted 25 July 2013 needs more PG13 violence and lens flare. looooooots more lens flare
luckyalex13 Posted 25 July 2013 Author Posted 25 July 2013 I'm not sure it's got legs... but it has 4 legs??
luckyalex13 Posted 26 July 2013 Author Posted 26 July 2013 To be fair, that's a bloody good chair. why thank you
Monk Posted 26 July 2013 Posted 26 July 2013 Nice site. If it's aimed at gaining readership, I think your writing is too geared towards it being a personal diary of what happened. As a reader, what useful information can I get out of these posts? I'm not a fan of blogspot, much prefer wordpress which generally looks better and can be more customised. To gain traffic you'll need to post more on things that people might be searching for. My blog is over at www.lostintrepid.com if interested....
luckyalex13 Posted 26 July 2013 Author Posted 26 July 2013 Nice site. If it's aimed at gaining readership, I think your writing is too geared towards it being a personal diary of what happened. As a reader, what useful information can I get out of these posts? I'm not a fan of blogspot, much prefer wordpress which generally looks better and can be more customised. To gain traffic you'll need to post more on things that people might be searching for. My blog is over at www.lostintrepid.com if interested.... thanks for the feedback, I only used blogspot as it was so easy to set up. this is more of a diary based blog but I am thinking of doing a more specific blog and may use wordpress for that. Your blog does look very professional!!!!
theessexfox Posted 26 July 2013 Posted 26 July 2013 new update if anyone is interested :-) Do not mess up the teas, whatever you do. Get a duck, run your whole team out if you like - but get the teas right.
luckyalex13 Posted 26 July 2013 Author Posted 26 July 2013 Do not mess up the teas, whatever you do. Get a duck, run your whole team out if you like - but get the teas right. in all honesty, it is my biggest responsibility of the season
FoxesAreBlue Posted 26 July 2013 Posted 26 July 2013 To be honest, when I first saw it I thought 'what the fvck is this tool on about?' BUT - I did read all of it before getting bored. It's an achievement to keep me entertained! Keep it up and good luck! Oh, and enjoy the chair! I do get where your coming from though... I had a similar thing the other week when I bought my first power tool (a cheap shitty home brand drill from B&Q). My god my life is complete now and it really is amazing how many holes my flat actually needs!
luckyalex13 Posted 26 July 2013 Author Posted 26 July 2013 To be honest, when I first saw it I thought 'what the fvck is this tool on about?' BUT - I did read all of it before getting bored. It's an achievement to keep me entertained! Keep it up and good luck! Oh, and enjoy the chair! I do get where your coming from though... I had a similar thing the other week when I bought my first power tool (a cheap shitty home brand drill from B&Q). My god my life is complete now and it really is amazing how many holes my flat actually needs! that is probably the best feedback I have had so far. Loving power tools also (hire a floor sander a while back and loved it!!!) but love sitting down more!! thank you :-)
Rincewind Posted 26 July 2013 Posted 26 July 2013 Not a bad effort. The organisation that I I work for encourages people with artistic talent and can even offer training. Keep up the good work.
luckyalex13 Posted 26 July 2013 Author Posted 26 July 2013 Not a bad effort. The organisation that I I work for encourages people with artistic talent and can even offer training. Keep up the good work. cheers :-) much appreciated
Trav Le Bleu Posted 26 July 2013 Posted 26 July 2013 needs more PG13 violence and lens flare. looooooots more lens flare Thanks Mr Abrams.
Captain... Posted 26 July 2013 Posted 26 July 2013 Nice site. If it's aimed at gaining readership, I think your writing is too geared towards it being a personal diary of what happened. As a reader, what useful information can I get out of these posts? I'm not a fan of blogspot, much prefer wordpress which generally looks better and can be more customised. To gain traffic you'll need to post more on things that people might be searching for. My blog is over at www.lostintrepid.com if interested.... Unless you want a career as an 'internet personality' I wouldn't worry too much about your readership, just keep on writing, and writing how you feel is natural and in a way you enjoy is a much better way of keeping it up rather than aiming it at a readership that you currently don't have. You will develop your style more and more as you write, so just keep at it. WordPress is better than blogspot.
BoneDog Posted 26 July 2013 Posted 26 July 2013 Nice site. If it's aimed at gaining readership, I think your writing is too geared towards it being a personal diary of what happened. As a reader, what useful information can I get out of these posts? I'm not a fan of blogspot, much prefer wordpress which generally looks better and can be more customised. To gain traffic you'll need to post more on things that people might be searching for. My blog is over at www.lostintrepid.com if interested.... Are you the tea guy? Saw your twitter the other day if so!
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