DB11 Posted 8 June 2008 Posted 8 June 2008 What do you think to my website? http://dan-foster.com Content isn't actually complete yet but the layout etc.
SamL Posted 8 June 2008 Posted 8 June 2008 Once the remaining content has been added it'll be a pretty decent website. Well done on the design, it's very aesthetically pleasing.
Libertine Posted 8 June 2008 Posted 8 June 2008 Yeh finish the content and change the bits under the links on the left.
DB11 Posted 8 June 2008 Author Posted 8 June 2008 Yeh finish the content and change the bits under the links on the left. Change to what?
Libertine Posted 8 June 2008 Posted 8 June 2008 Something a bit more 'wordy'. e.g. Instead of 'some good links' have something like 'Useful Links'.
Lillehamring Posted 8 June 2008 Posted 8 June 2008 um, who is 'pear tree' - is that you, if so, fair enough... if it's sombody else, then...meh.
Bryn Posted 8 June 2008 Posted 8 June 2008 The website itself is good I think. Your writing itself could use some work though. There are probably articles out there on how to write in a style suitable for a website if you're remotely arsed but I wouldn't shit yourself with worry cause it's no biggy.
Daggers Posted 8 June 2008 Posted 8 June 2008 There's no porn. What is the point in an interweb site without porn?
DB11 Posted 8 June 2008 Author Posted 8 June 2008 um, who is 'pear tree' - is that you, if so, fair enough...if it's sombody else, then...meh. The guy who helped with the site. Made it cheaper and he's a mate The website itself is good I think. Your writing itself could use some work though. There are probably articles out there on how to write in a style suitable for a website if you're remotely arsed but I wouldn't shit yourself with worry cause it's no biggy. I haven't started on the content yet, it's just on there from the previous site
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