hbkkids Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 instalments i am doing every Thursday now, first off is leicester city anyway next week is Charlton. here is the video if you want to have a look (if this dont require a new thread please feel free to merge http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKCSP1l__bQ
hbkkids Posted 21 June 2012 Author Posted 21 June 2012 i will post the video every thursday in this thread if that is ok? :scarf: :pearson:
hbkkids Posted 21 June 2012 Author Posted 21 June 2012 Pretty good but slow down and take a breath ok, thanks. i was talking fast so i didnt make a mistake. must of had about 20 goes at before getting it right.
lavrentis Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 ok, thanks. i was talking fast so i didnt make a mistake. must of had about 20 goes at before getting it right. Ha ah right, I have that same problem to be honest when reading scripts on video and that but yeah, decent vid.
HEGGSY Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 What lav said, also it'd help if you didn't just read off Wiki.
hbkkids Posted 21 June 2012 Author Posted 21 June 2012 What lav said, also it'd help if you didn't just read of Wiki. how did you know? and i tried to change a couple words. but it was just a quick vid.
HEGGSY Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 I know things. I don't mean to sound pedantic, it was a good video. If you vary a few things, then it won't be so obvious.
Captain... Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 instalments i am doing every Thursday now, first off is leicester city anyway next week is Charlton. here is the video if you want to have a look (if this dont require a new thread please feel free to merge http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bKCSP1l__bQ Nice work what video editing software did you use? Just a couple of things to improve on your other ones, first use the current league logos or without sponsors on, it looks better and doesn't go out of date eg: Try and vary the pictures a bit as well, we saw the same shot of the KP a few times, it would be nice to see it from the outside or above. Finally if you want something to be really good you have to put the time in to it, and you have to be a perfectionist, you stumbled over your words a couple of times and it just takes the edge off it, there is nothing wrong with slowing down how you talk to make it clearer and it also makes it easier to edit. Edit: I just saw you did 20 takes, sometimes it will take 100 takes to get it perfect but it really is worth the effort.
Fox92 Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 Decent attempt to be fair, I know it can be a little strange just talking through a microphone.
Danno Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 Can I use some of this for my GCSE project on monday? Got to give a 2 minute talk on monday about anything I want Can I use some of this for my GCSE project on monday? Got to give a 2 minute talk on monday about anything I want
hbkkids Posted 21 June 2012 Author Posted 21 June 2012 Can I use some of this for my GCSE project on monday? Got to give a 2 minute talk on monday about anything I want Can I use some of this for my GCSE project on monday? Got to give a 2 minute talk on monday about anything I want yep. No problem
hbkkids Posted 21 June 2012 Author Posted 21 June 2012 Decent attempt to be fair, I know it can be a little strange just talking through a microphone. yeah it is. Weird talking to yourself
kingfox Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 Yep updated badges of the Championship is needed, so that would be Npower of course. Different pics of the ground would be good instead of just one. Also if some kid 10 or below watches the vid, the picture of a fox might scare them, so in future if you do someone like Newcastle get a picture of a cartoon magpie instead of a real one. All in all little good vid that.
hbkkids Posted 21 June 2012 Author Posted 21 June 2012 Yep updated badges of the Championship is needed, so that would be Npower of course. Different pics of the ground would be good instead of just one. Also if some kid 10 or below watches the vid, the picture of a fox might scare them, so in future if you do someone like Newcastle get a picture of a cartoon magpie instead of a real one. All in all little good vid that. I forgot about the coca cola championship. And thanks for the advice. Thanks
lavrentis Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 Northern accent..nooooo! Sounds like a Leicester one too me
Lamby Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 Sounds like a Leicester one too me Leicester = northern
The Doctor Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 Sounds like a Leicester one too me c'mon, he's an Londoner - the Midlands might as well be the Shetlands for all he knows.
lavrentis Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 Leicester = northern Yeah clearly. c'mon, he's an Londoner - the Midlands might as well be the Shetlands for all he knows. Maybe for the ignorant
Lamby Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 c'mon, he's an Londoner - the Midlands might as well be the Shetlands for all he knows. Anything outside the M25 is Northern
Danizen Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 A good start, bud. Spend a bit more time on research, uncover bits of interesting trivia that people might not know about their club. The series is called, 'Your Club' I'd bet even the most casual fan knows what their stadium is called. Maybe talk about great players and managers from years gone by. Most teams in the Championship have at least one period they look back on fondly, find it and focus on it because happier fans are more likely to subscribe. I'm guessing you're a Leicester fan and you talked about our club favourably make sure you do this for other clubs videos, too. Keep at it and you will become more self confident. Nothing to say about the video editing. It was spot on. Like something you'd see on Soccer AM.
Lamby Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 No it isn't. It is, its northern from my house...so technical term is "northern"
Danizen Posted 21 June 2012 Posted 21 June 2012 It is, its northern from my house...so technical term is "northern" Pfft. Southern fairy. Eat your caviar, dear.
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