Hello everyone. If I can introduce myself I am the Father of the aspiring young journalist. Which also means I have the privilege of being the Brother of @Suzie the Fox
I just wanted to come on and thank everyone for their honest assessments of his article. Yes I had read it first and spotted the mistakes but I wanted a "warts and all" opinion which he has got. He is a massive City fan, and we were season ticket holders until he left home for Uni.
Thanks again, Domsdad