ScouseFox Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 people can actually read 50 pages in a day crikey. on page 9 but i skipped the villa away bit. it's good like. pretty sure it is gwladys street not gwladys road tho but what's the bloody difference between pals hey.
Fez of Mahrez Posted 4 June 2015 Author Posted 4 June 2015 people can actually read 50 pages in a day crikey. on page 9 but i skipped the villa away bit. it's good like. pretty sure it is gwladys street not gwladys road tho but what's the bloody difference between pals hey. Good spot, cheers. This has been a lesson in proof reading. You can never quite get everything! I'll ask UFS to upload an amended version in a few days. There's bound to be more things people see.
ScouseFox Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Good spot, cheers. This has been a lesson in proof reading. You can never quite get everything! I'll ask UFS to upload an amended version in a few days. There's bound to be more things people see. genuinely don't think i'd have noticed if i didn't follow someone on twitter called gwladys street something or other. i'm on page 10 now it's still good.
fleckneymike Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Union FS made their new website live last night - http://www.unionfs.co.uk I think the people who run Union FS have done a brilliant job so far and it's great that they've now got a website to match. The website hosts a 50-page mini-book I've written about the period between February and May, which I wanted to put out there for anyone who wants to have a read. This is a diary I started writing at the time. It got difficult at one stage when it looked like it was just going to be a catalogue of misery, but it was worth persevering and actually, I hope, ends up being a worthwhile record of an important time in our club's history. It finally clocked in at just under 23,000 words. http://www.unionfs.co.uk/the-greatest-escape.html - (click the button in the bottom right) I'm also indebted to ttfn who gave extremely valuable feedback as part of the writing process. All feedback gratefully received. Hope you enjoy it. Cheers In a rush so apologies Paragraph 1. Your second sentence should really be your final sentence. Sentence three should use the definite article 'the' rather than the indefinate 'a' as we actually know what you are talking about. Sentences 4 (In 200...) and 5 (We pick..) would be better reversed (and adjustements made accordingly to ensure it makes sense). Not meant to sound rude but rushing through.
biggs Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Great read. Remarkable what occurred the last 9 games when you read Peter Swan's quote (Hull Daily Mail), Thursday 12th March and then Cambiasso's, less than a month later on Thursday 2nd April. It truly shows the spirit of this team.
Fez of Mahrez Posted 4 June 2015 Author Posted 4 June 2015 In a rush so apologies Paragraph 1. Your second sentence should really be your final sentence. Sentence three should use the definite article 'the' rather than the indefinate 'a' as we actually know what you are talking about. Sentences 4 (In 200...) and 5 (We pick..) would be better reversed (and adjustements made accordingly to ensure it makes sense). Not meant to sound rude but rushing through. No worries, all fair points. You might not want to do that for all 50 pages though!
ScouseFox Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 good read fez. now officially the second book i've ever read, after mr nice of course.
Fox92 Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 You should definitely look into publishing it Fez, I'd definitely buy it and I'm sure a lot of other fans would too. Great work.
steveherbe Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Brilliant read, a literary masterpiece. Congrats mate, best thing I've read all year
Guest MarshallForEngland Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 In a rush so apologies Paragraph 1. Your second sentence should really be your final sentence. Sentence three should use the definite article 'the' rather than the indefinate 'a' as we actually know what you are talking about. Sentences 4 (In 200...) and 5 (We pick..) would be better reversed (and adjustements made accordingly to ensure it makes sense). Not meant to sound rude but rushing through. I disagree.
HighPeakFox Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 In a rush so apologies Paragraph 1. Your second sentence should really be your final sentence. Sentence three should use the definite article 'the' rather than the indefinate 'a' as we actually know what you are talking about. Sentences 4 (In 200...) and 5 (We pick..) would be better reversed (and adjustements made accordingly to ensure it makes sense). Not meant to sound rude but rushing through. Indefinite Apologies, just a pet hate of mine
fleckneymike Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Indefinite Apologies, just a pet hate of mine Apologies. multimodal talk, big thumbs and all that
ScouseFox Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 can everyone stop apologising and someone call someone else a bellend please
Carl the Llama Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 can everyone stop apologising and someone call someone else a bellend please Stop being a bellend.
Hollism Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Stop being a bellend. I wanted to be the first to call him a bellend! You bellend
fleckneymike Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 I wanted to be the first to call him a bellend! You bellend Apologies but I wanted to call him a bellend you bunch of bellends
Izzy Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Great stuff - well done. Love all the quotes too. Really brings the story to life
Dom_Harborough Fox Posted 4 June 2015 Posted 4 June 2015 Been reading this in spare time over the last couple of days. Cracking read. Brilliant job! Made me feel like I was going through it all again.
Countesthorpe Fox 1884 Posted 5 June 2015 Posted 5 June 2015 great read! Look forward to the sequel next year!
anotherwin Posted 5 June 2015 Posted 5 June 2015 A very good account of the pain and ecstasy we all went through, well done
ozleicester Posted 5 June 2015 Posted 5 June 2015 Union FS made their new website live last night - http://www.unionfs.co.uk I think the people who run Union FS have done a brilliant job so far and it's great that they've now got a website to match. The website hosts a 50-page mini-book I've written about the period between February and May, which I wanted to put out there for anyone who wants to have a read. This is a diary I started writing at the time. It got difficult at one stage when it looked like it was just going to be a catalogue of misery, but it was worth persevering and actually, I hope, ends up being a worthwhile record of an important time in our club's history. It finally clocked in at just under 23,000 words. http://www.unionfs.co.uk/the-greatest-escape.html - (click the button in the bottom right) I'm also indebted to ttfn who gave extremely valuable feedback as part of the writing process. All feedback gratefully received. Hope you enjoy it. Cheers Looks good, have you considered hosting it on Issuu just to make it easily readable and is free. Just a suggestion
6ups 6downs 2 cups Posted 5 June 2015 Posted 5 June 2015 Sat in a pub reading that, just brings it all back, if I could travel back in time, forget the birth of Jesus, it would be 2.59pm April 4 2015 and relive the following 2 months!
Fez of Mahrez Posted 5 June 2015 Author Posted 5 June 2015 Looks good, have you considered hosting it on Issuu just to make it easily readable and is free. Just a suggestion Yeah, good idea. Have used Issuu before and it worked well. Will have a look into it for this if I can get some pictures to use.
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